Reviewer: Ashley1984 (Signed) · Date: 07/30/10 04:53 pm · On: Brian (III)
I am so glad you are continuing this!! I'm really looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're still liking it - I appreciate the review! :)
Reviewer: AJBrianFan (Signed) · Date: 07/30/10 02:00 pm · On: Brian (III)
Wow. I'm so glad to finally read an update of this. This is a great story. I hope this gets updated again soon. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! It will probably be at least a couple weeks; my sister is about to have a baby, and I'm thinking once that happens, I'll get inspired to write the next chapter, which is Jori-centered. Jori is a very exaggerated version of my sister LOL, so it should be perfect. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: steffilu84 (Signed) · Date: 07/30/10 10:02 am · On: Brian (III)
I like the detail in this chapter. You've gotten very detail with the hospital room scenes over the years (comes with practice I guess, lol). Still interested to see where you are going with this story but in the mean time have enjoyed each chapter and the moments within them. I guess what I really like about this story is the care you've taken with it to make each chapter say exactly what it needs to say. Just wish it would get updated more often =) but I also understand.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!! :) I'm a lot more anal about details and researching to make sure I get things as realistic as I can - Broken did that to me LOL. I couldn't write without Google handy LOL. Thanks for noticing and appreciating that! :) I wish I would update this story more often too... I really do like it, and I think part of my problem with it is that I, at the risk of sounding arrogant, I like what I've already written for it so much that when I try to force more out and the writing isn't at the same level, I just stop writing and wait for inspiration to strike... and then that takes forever to happen LOL. So it could be slow-going like this the whole way, but I have this story planned out to almost the end, so there's really no excuse for me not finishing it... it just may take awhile! Thanks for sticking with me; I really appreciate your reviews! :)
Reviewer: starbeamz2 (Signed) · Date: 07/30/10 09:25 am · On: Brian (III)
Yay! I'm so glad you updated! Sorry, I fell asleep probably seconds before you updated, so I'm reading it now. It was awesome! And, now, I know that Jori dies in a car accident instead of in childbirth complications. Or, at least, it should be Jori, right? Watch, you probably have another trick up your sleeve :P Anyway, I can be your cheerleader for this one anytime, so we can get another awesome update for this :P
Guess what? It's time for you to update Guilty Roads! I'll move on to harrassing you about that one now lol
Author's Response: Sorry, I was slow at proofreading it! Thanks again SO MUCH for inspiring me yesterday! I'm really excited I got this chapter done! I'm thinking I will probably hold off a couple weeks on trying to write the next one; I wanna wait for my nephew to be born cause I think that will give me some inspiration to write it better. Maybe I can get something done on GR in the meantime. ;) My goal today is to finish Chapter 17 of CC and at least start my 00Carter part, so we'll see - one day at a time. Thanks again, Sarah; I'm so psyched you're reading and enjoying this story! :)
Reviewer: Rose (Signed) · Date: 07/30/10 01:54 am · On: Brian (III)
Okay so I managed to read it before bed. :) And wow. Just wow. Poor Brian, thats a lot to go through. But yay for him coming through the operation okay! (Knew he would, you wouldn't wanna kill Broken Heart Brian just yet LOL).
Even though you don't update this one often, I still love an adore it. I can't wait to see where you go with this now that Brian has his new heart...and AJ has his Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds hehe.
Totally Triple Rainbow worthy.
Author's Response: Aww, you know I couldn't kill BHB this early in the story! 0=D Thanks for the review, DR! I like this story, even if I never update it. I think part of the reason I never update it is because I like it so much, I just stop writing when my writing isn't up to par on it. I dunno why it's so hard to write; hopefully it'll get easier now that the transplant is out of the way. Thanks for the TR - highest praise possible right there! ;) What does it mean?!
Reviewer: summer03 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/10 06:39 pm · On: AJ (II)
Ok so I read it all and I can't wait for more. I hope you update soon cause I will keep thinking about Brian and how the surgery went. I just love your stories. I like the way your writing the story and I can feel what all the characters are going through. I love it and I will be on the look out for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! You'll find out at the start of the next chapter how Brian's surgery went, I promise. I just started it today... hopefully I won't take too long to write it. I'm jumping around between about 5 different stories that I'm writing right now, and my muse is being really ADD, so I make no promises LOL. Anyway, I appreciate you reading, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks so much for the compliment on my stories in general; you're sweet! :)
Reviewer: AJBrianFan (Signed) · Date: 06/09/10 11:03 pm · On: AJ (II)
Aw, thank you for updating this! I hope you will again soon! :)
Author's Response: You're welcome - thanks for reading and reviewing it! I'm glad you're still enjoying it. I've *started* on the next chapter already, so that's a good sign. :)
Reviewer: Rose (Signed) · Date: 06/09/10 07:20 pm · On: AJ (II)
Wow, how did I miss the previous updates? Still wondering how I did that lol. Anywho, I love it still. Lucy Sky Diamond McLean, how very AJish lol.
I just love the story and can't wait to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: LOL don't worry about it, you weren't missing much! Thank you anyway! It was always my joke with my sister that she was gonna name her daughter Lucy Sky Diamond... thankfully, she's having a boy. Anyway, I'm glad you're still liking it - thanks for the review! =D
Reviewer: livie112 (Signed) · Date: 02/23/10 10:37 pm · On: Brian (I)
please update!!!
Author's Response: Whoops, sorry I missed this review back when you left it, but just wanted to say thank you and let you know that I just updated today. Yay!
Reviewer: AJBrianFan (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 01:37 am · On: Brian (II)
I love this! I hope this gets updated at some point, I'm dying to find out what happens!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry for slacking so bad on this one... I probably shouldn't have even posted it until it was further along because it's more of a side project, and it seems like my inspiration comes and goes in waves. It's a tough story to write, but I definitely am going to continue it... I just can't promise when there will be another update. =/ Sorry about that! I so appreciate you reading and reviewing, though, so thank you!!
Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian (Signed) · Date: 08/17/09 10:17 pm · On: Brian (II)
Oye vey in a half shell! You have GOT to update this!!!!! I swear I've read it before, but I can't remember what happens! Brian has GOT to live!!!! He has jsut GOT too!!!! I wanna say Jori too, but I've a sinking feeling she don't & it's her heart Brian's getting. Eep! UPDATE!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~
Author's Response: Thanks Lenni! You did leave me a review for this story last year when I first posted it, but that was quite awhile ago! I just hadn't updated it in forever LOL. This is all there is of it so far, but hopefully there will be more soon-ish. I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks again for the review! :)
Reviewer: steffilu84 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/09 11:53 am · On: Brian (II)
Oh I forgot to mention in yesterday's review, I would take chick-fil-a over KFC anyday.
Author's Response: LOL! I have to say I disagree... but then, my only experience with Chick-Fil-A was the one in the dining hall at college, so maybe other Chick-Fil-As are better. There aren't any in my area, apart from that one. The chicken there always had a weird aftertaste and was a little iffy on how it would make you feel afterwards LOL.
Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva (Signed) · Date: 08/10/09 10:25 pm · On: Brian (II)
awe! glad to see an update! more soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Thanks for sticking with it; glad you're still reading! I hope there will be more soon too! LOL :)
Reviewer: steffilu84 (Signed) · Date: 08/10/09 11:48 am · On: Brian (II)
Yeah update! And two chapters, awesome! You had me worried there for a while. I am excited about this story and where you are going to go with it. I have always said what makes a good AU is the ability of the author to keep the boys personalities outside the context of the band. There is always a danger in just creating new characters and just giving them the names AJ, Brian, Nick, Howie, Kevin. I love how you have captured the essence of Brian and AJ and even Howie in this story so far but also making the neccessary changes in them not being "the boys". I don't know if that made any sense but in short good job, keep up the good work and can't wait for more. The whole "supernatural" in the genre discription has me very intrigued.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm really excited to finally revive this story, and hopefully there won't be such a long delay next time! =P I'm glad you're still into it; I really appreciate that!! I know what you mean about AU... I don't see the point in changing their personalities, unless there's a logical reason for it within the story... at that point, though, why not just call it original fiction? I think the fun part about AU is trying to keep them the same people, just living different lives. I'm glad that aspect seems to work for you in this story! As for the "supernatural" aspect... wait and see; it'll come into play later on. I don't consider myself much of a supernatural writer, so I can't promise it will be wildly original or believable, but hopefully it will be entertaining. Thanks again for your review!! :)
Reviewer: Bshorty13 (Signed) · Date: 12/29/08 01:48 am · On: Becci (I)
oooo interesting story..can't wait for more...update soon...
Author's Response: Thanks! I've been trying to get the next chapter done... so far I only have two pages of it though LOL. I suck. But hopefully it'll be done and up in the next few days while I'm still on break!
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